Poem Number Two!

[conuly]

Playing with different types of poetry
I hope I've gotten this right
It should be a kimo.

Let's try again, shall we?

Freezing at the bus stop, trying to read.
The birds turn above my head.
I have no Metrocard.

Tomorrow, I'll tackle something that rhymes.

Comments

[erinlin.livejournal.com]

A kimo, hum? I've never heard of that before, that's really neat. I think I like the first of yours the best. ^_^

[erinlin.livejournal.com]

A kimo, hum? I've never heard of that before, that's really neat. I think I like the first of yours the best. ^_^