Today's haiku

[conuly]

Green whirlybirds
Falling downwards in the air
Today I can't breathe.

Comments

[absurdixie.livejournal.com]

I don't know why, but it reminded me of gas used in WW1, because I'm sure I recall reading that it was green... though, I'm probably way off. XD

[conuly]

*blinkblinkblink*

I was thinking of maple seeds, which make rhino horns on your nose. Because we don't have cherry blossoms.

[absurdixie.livejournal.com]

... so I was way off. Good to know. =/ This is why I fail when analysing Poetry.

[conuly]

Don't be silly. Reader interpretation is key.

[katschakai.livejournal.com]

Dude, I know I'm all sensitive because my medication mishap, but you made me cry.

[conuly]

*hugs*

Sorry.

Thank you

[katschakai.livejournal.com]

It was really pretty (the haiku, not the crying)

[feathered.livejournal.com]

I love that you used "whirlybirds." I like this one a lot, more than the others, which says a lot -- I'm enjoying watching this experiment of yours. I'll be sad if you stop. (Am also sad that I am three days behind. I refuse to start late and so will not do it at all.)

[absurdixie.livejournal.com]

I don't know why, but it reminded me of gas used in WW1, because I'm sure I recall reading that it was green... though, I'm probably way off. XD

[conuly]

*blinkblinkblink*

I was thinking of maple seeds, which make rhino horns on your nose. Because we don't have cherry blossoms.

[absurdixie.livejournal.com]

... so I was way off. Good to know. =/ This is why I fail when analysing Poetry.

[conuly]

Don't be silly. Reader interpretation is key.

[katschakai.livejournal.com]

Dude, I know I'm all sensitive because my medication mishap, but you made me cry.

[conuly]

*hugs*

Sorry.

Thank you

[katschakai.livejournal.com]

It was really pretty (the haiku, not the crying)

[feathered.livejournal.com]

I love that you used "whirlybirds." I like this one a lot, more than the others, which says a lot -- I'm enjoying watching this experiment of yours. I'll be sad if you stop. (Am also sad that I am three days behind. I refuse to start late and so will not do it at all.)