On one hand, using semicolons instead of commas when either would do would absolutely reduce the number of commas in my writing.
On the other hand, I'd then look like the sort of dweeb who uses semicolons on reddit. And when I say I'd look that way, I mean I'd absolutely be that way. Plus, would I really be accomplishing anything besides fooling myself? What I really need to do is either a. let it go or b. start rewriting my sentences to be comma-free, ideally without making them choppy.
Hm.
Is it possible I want too much? Are all these goals actually achievable at the same time?
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The Outsiders: The letter that inspired a cult classic
China showcases its first lightweight lunar spacesuit designed for 2030 moon landing
Black hole shot a beam through space. NASA snapped stunning footage.
Spanish mother and daughter train bacteria to restore church frescoes
Port strikes end with deal on wages, averting economic disaster
‘I am going to die’: North Dakota teen in runaway vehicle saved by crashing into police car
Newsom vetoes bill that would have required speed-limit alert systems in new cars
Millions depend on the Mississippi—but the mighty river is running dry
Far right wins close Austria election, a boost for Putin
Switzerland and Italy redraw border due to melting glaciers
Helene’s powerful storm surge killed 12 near Tampa. They didn’t have to die
On the other hand, I'd then look like the sort of dweeb who uses semicolons on reddit. And when I say I'd look that way, I mean I'd absolutely be that way. Plus, would I really be accomplishing anything besides fooling myself? What I really need to do is either a. let it go or b. start rewriting my sentences to be comma-free, ideally without making them choppy.
Hm.
Is it possible I want too much? Are all these goals actually achievable at the same time?
The Outsiders: The letter that inspired a cult classic
China showcases its first lightweight lunar spacesuit designed for 2030 moon landing
Black hole shot a beam through space. NASA snapped stunning footage.
Spanish mother and daughter train bacteria to restore church frescoes
Port strikes end with deal on wages, averting economic disaster
‘I am going to die’: North Dakota teen in runaway vehicle saved by crashing into police car
Newsom vetoes bill that would have required speed-limit alert systems in new cars
Millions depend on the Mississippi—but the mighty river is running dry
Far right wins close Austria election, a boost for Putin
Switzerland and Italy redraw border due to melting glaciers
Helene’s powerful storm surge killed 12 near Tampa. They didn’t have to die
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Date: 2024-10-05 07:34 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2024-10-05 07:51 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2024-10-05 08:33 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2024-10-05 07:59 am (UTC)(Except when separating items on a long list, where some of the items themselves are long enough to need commas, so semi-colons are added for clarity. Though I guess in most situations these days that woudn't be an issue – for writing online I'd use bullet points.)
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Date: 2024-10-05 08:43 am (UTC)Like a crisis of religious belief, but happening in middle age and possibly more traumatic.
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Date: 2024-10-05 12:47 pm (UTC)Formally, you're supposed to use semi-colons for things that could be separate sentences, and commas otherwise. The sentence above doesn't have a semi-colon, because "and commas otherwise" doesn't work by itself as a sentence.
That's late-20th and early 21st century usage, and for American English. In works from the 19th century, commas sometimes indicate places where someone speaking would/should pause for breath and/or emphasis.
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Date: 2024-10-05 05:48 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2024-10-05 09:37 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2024-10-05 11:42 am (UTC)Long sentences? Read some of these!link removed
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Date: 2024-10-05 12:31 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2024-10-05 01:07 pm (UTC)I love a comment I read in a review an Aubrey-Maturin novel: "O'Brian has the wittiest semi-colons since Jane Austen." Of course not everyone uses them as a stylistic device. :-)
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Date: 2024-10-05 04:40 pm (UTC)Plot matters more.
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Date: 2024-10-08 03:23 am (UTC)Commas and semicolons are both important tools. They're usually tools for different things; I don't think of them as trading off against each other.