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I enjoyed it except for three things that keep bugging me. (As always, having a few details bug me is better than perfection.)

1. There is no way either of our happy endings is going to be so happy without a lot of therapy, which they won't have because this is medieval not-Russia (or maybe medieval not-Poland) (EDIT: It's medieval not-Lithuania! or maybe just regular Lithuania) and that hasn't been invented yet. One of the two husbands has spent his entire life carefully cultivating a profound lack of interest in anything, for his own safety, and I don't see him unlearning that any time soon. (Plus, he's no longer immune to the magic crown, is he? Yeah.) The other seriously needs to learn to talk to people, and the sooner, the better.

2. So many new POV characters. Just when you think you've got them all, there's a new one, and the transitions aren't always clearly marked.

3. POTATOES. Now, we don't have an exact date on this story, but I feel fairly confident that it predates Columbus discovering America, which means there should be no potatoes. And I can't even edit them to "turnips" as I usually do because our characters spend time cutting out and planting the eyes. And this universe is too obviously our universe but with magic, so we can't ignore it either!

But, you know, those things are small potatoes. (Which are all in Peru at this time in history, I'm just pointing out again.)

Date: 2019-05-05 10:58 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] hannah
Potatoes are the crown jewel of the New World, bar none.

Earlier today I was talking to someone about pre-Columbus Italian cuisine, before the tomato and potato were introduced. It threw him, because he'd never had reason to consider what it would've been like. I hear you on not being able to ignore that sort of thing - at one point I got thrown out of an alt-Greece book because someone used "inches" with no indication they'd ever been conquered by England.

Date: 2019-05-06 03:09 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] mount_oregano
Another reason potatoes improved the diet of the average European is that it's hard for marauding armies to steal potatoes or set fire to them if they're underground. When the soldiers moved on, the locals weren't faced with starvation.

But potatoes came to Europe after 1492. Also sunflowers. Tobacco. Turkeys. Chocolate!

Date: 2019-05-06 12:38 am (UTC)
ioplokon: the demon rosemary (wrestler) (rosemary)
From: [personal profile] ioplokon
It's really amazing how few people know that potatoes, tomatoes, etc. aren't indigenous to Europe (& on the other end, I have trouble remembering that like, mangoes aren't from South America)

Also, it wasn't til I was working in Europe & had the chance to travel to the UK that I learned that there, turnip= rutabaga.

All this to say, root vegetables are an absolute menace for writers striving for cultural accuracy...

Date: 2019-05-06 02:07 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] archangelbeth
Someone needs to get UrsulaV to read this book, if there is a chance of a Potato Rant resulting from it. >:)

Date: 2019-05-07 01:00 am (UTC)
archangelbeth: An egyptian-inspired eye, centered between feathered wings. (Default)
From: [personal profile] archangelbeth
All the tasty stuff! There were, uh, traders!

Date: 2019-05-08 04:41 am (UTC)
archangelbeth: An egyptian-inspired eye, centered between feathered wings. (Default)
From: [personal profile] archangelbeth
*handwaves like a hummingbird*

Date: 2019-05-10 03:40 am (UTC)
archangelbeth: An egyptian-inspired eye, centered between feathered wings. (Default)
From: [personal profile] archangelbeth
Unless they get blown really off-course... >_>

(...invasion of Europe by pixies riding stolen hummingbirds!)

Date: 2019-05-11 04:32 am (UTC)
archangelbeth: An egyptian-inspired eye, centered between feathered wings. (Default)
From: [personal profile] archangelbeth
It's what comes of having a sword on your face!

...which now gets me thinking of pixies with barbed-wire bridles on their hummingbird mounts, yanking them into formation, like little flying evil stallions who hate each other desperately. Maybe stick blinkers on them so they can't see each other so well!

Date: 2019-05-12 07:13 pm (UTC)
archangelbeth: An egyptian-inspired eye, centered between feathered wings. (Default)
From: [personal profile] archangelbeth

They feast upon the blood of their enemies! They're vampire hummingbirds!

That's why the pixies go invading everywhere. Their blood-drinking hummingbirds take a lot of work.

Sent from my iPhone

Date: 2019-05-06 02:14 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] landofnowhere
It's been a while since I read that book, but how can you tell when it's set? I don't think I was trying to figure out the time period when I was reading it...

Date: 2019-05-06 01:23 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] landofnowhere
Cool!

Date: 2019-05-06 02:15 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] flikkeren
I liked the book, but the ending kinda bothered me. I wanted better for Mireym and Irina than those d-bags... it all just seemed too pat and tied with a bow, and very unrealistic that it was being sold as "happy," as you say.

I like to think the potatoes got there by ~magic~

Date: 2019-05-06 03:31 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] hamsterwoman
Yes, totally to #1! Miryem/Staryk Lord is actually the more baffling one to me, because they had like six months to talk while rebuilding the Staryk lands? And she was still totally blindsided by the marriage plans. Not a great track record of communication! (I loved the book very much but the choices Novik made in writing the main relationship makes no sense to me.)

I was OK with the POVs until Magreta showed up -- that was one too many. (Also, I would've appreciated not having them switch mid-chapter. That was needlessly confusing.)

I do think it's meant to be Lithuania, but I don't think it's following any sort of Earth timeline (which only had a kingdom of Lithuania at 1251-1263), so maybe it was post-Columbus? My sense was it was taking place during the general Pale of Settlement era, i.e. ~18th century. I see your point about the Crusades, and it does seem like Novik was maybe going for the 1200s/1300s with the kingdom of Lithvas. But I also thought it was maybe set after the expulsion of Jews from Spain, because of a reference to someone's relative leaving what sounded like a southern-climate country. I expect it's all a giant mishmash of centuries, because fantasy.

Date: 2019-05-07 03:35 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lassarina
The transitions of POV bugged the hell out of me, too.

Date: 2019-05-12 06:15 pm (UTC)
staranise: A star anise floating in a cup of mint tea (Default)
From: [personal profile] staranise
I took the decor in the palace to make it more 1600s or 1700s, like Uprooted, partly because potatoes are such a known tell of the Columbian exchange. Because ripping open small rooms to install huge gilt-covered fireplaces has a lot of resonances to Alexander the Great in Russia forcing his court to become Europeanized. Although.... that doesn't explan the Khan.

Date: 2019-05-06 12:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mme-n-b.livejournal.com
It’s medieval not-Lithuania

Date: 2019-05-06 12:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mme-n-b.livejournal.com
And I promise you that the whole area, including Russia, Poland, and Lithuania was like that until at least eighteenth century.

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