Just finished Spinning Silver
May. 7th, 2019 06:35 pmI enjoyed it except for three things that keep bugging me. (As always, having a few details bug me is better than perfection.)
1. There is no way either of our happy endings is going to be so happy without a lot of therapy, which they won't have because this is medieval not-Russia (or maybe medieval not-Poland) (EDIT: It's medieval not-Lithuania! or maybe just regular Lithuania) and that hasn't been invented yet. One of the two husbands has spent his entire life carefully cultivating a profound lack of interest in anything, for his own safety, and I don't see him unlearning that any time soon. (Plus, he's no longer immune to the magic crown, is he? Yeah.) The other seriously needs to learn to talk to people, and the sooner, the better.
2. So many new POV characters. Just when you think you've got them all, there's a new one, and the transitions aren't always clearly marked.
3. POTATOES. Now, we don't have an exact date on this story, but I feel fairly confident that it predates Columbus discovering America, which means there should be no potatoes. And I can't even edit them to "turnips" as I usually do because our characters spend time cutting out and planting the eyes. And this universe is too obviously our universe but with magic, so we can't ignore it either!
But, you know, those things are small potatoes. (Which are all in Peru at this time in history, I'm just pointing out again.)
1. There is no way either of our happy endings is going to be so happy without a lot of therapy, which they won't have because this is medieval not-Russia (or maybe medieval not-Poland) (EDIT: It's medieval not-Lithuania! or maybe just regular Lithuania) and that hasn't been invented yet. One of the two husbands has spent his entire life carefully cultivating a profound lack of interest in anything, for his own safety, and I don't see him unlearning that any time soon. (Plus, he's no longer immune to the magic crown, is he? Yeah.) The other seriously needs to learn to talk to people, and the sooner, the better.
2. So many new POV characters. Just when you think you've got them all, there's a new one, and the transitions aren't always clearly marked.
3. POTATOES. Now, we don't have an exact date on this story, but I feel fairly confident that it predates Columbus discovering America, which means there should be no potatoes. And I can't even edit them to "turnips" as I usually do because our characters spend time cutting out and planting the eyes. And this universe is too obviously our universe but with magic, so we can't ignore it either!
But, you know, those things are small potatoes. (Which are all in Peru at this time in history, I'm just pointing out again.)
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Date: 2019-05-05 10:58 pm (UTC)Earlier today I was talking to someone about pre-Columbus Italian cuisine, before the tomato and potato were introduced. It threw him, because he'd never had reason to consider what it would've been like. I hear you on not being able to ignore that sort of thing - at one point I got thrown out of an alt-Greece book because someone used "inches" with no indication they'd ever been conquered by England.
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Date: 2019-05-06 03:09 am (UTC)But potatoes came to Europe after 1492. Also sunflowers. Tobacco. Turkeys. Chocolate!
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Date: 2019-05-06 04:02 am (UTC)Another reason potatoes improved the diet of the average European is that it's hard for marauding armies to steal potatoes or set fire to them if they're underground. When the soldiers moved on, the locals weren't faced with starvation.
Root crops are also harder to tax, which may be a mixed blessing - no taxation means a more limited, less centralized state, and that's both good and bad.
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Date: 2019-05-06 12:38 am (UTC)Also, it wasn't til I was working in Europe & had the chance to travel to the UK that I learned that there, turnip= rutabaga.
All this to say, root vegetables are an absolute menace for writers striving for cultural accuracy...
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Date: 2019-05-06 12:41 am (UTC)Back to potatoes, one person responded to me one with "What, are you saying that there weren't any potatoes in Ireland or Russia in the Middle Ages!?" and... yes, that is precisely what I just told you, sir.
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Date: 2019-05-10 03:40 am (UTC)(...invasion of Europe by pixies riding stolen hummingbirds!)
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Date: 2019-05-11 04:32 am (UTC)...which now gets me thinking of pixies with barbed-wire bridles on their hummingbird mounts, yanking them into formation, like little flying evil stallions who hate each other desperately. Maybe stick blinkers on them so they can't see each other so well!
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Date: 2019-05-12 07:13 pm (UTC)They feast upon the blood of their enemies! They're vampire hummingbirds!
That's why the pixies go invading everywhere. Their blood-drinking hummingbirds take a lot of work.
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Date: 2019-05-06 02:14 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2019-05-06 02:36 am (UTC)The last Crusade in our world was in the 1200s, and the Mongol Invasions were done by 1405. Even allowing for a little bit of alternate history, there should be no potatoes.
(Actually, with those two bookends I feel safe in saying that it takes place sometime in the 1200s or 1300s, probably smack in the middle of that range because nobody seems to be worried about the Black Death.)
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Date: 2019-05-06 02:15 am (UTC)I like to think the potatoes got there by ~magic~
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Date: 2019-05-06 02:35 am (UTC)2. They did not.
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Date: 2019-05-06 03:31 am (UTC)I was OK with the POVs until Magreta showed up -- that was one too many. (Also, I would've appreciated not having them switch mid-chapter. That was needlessly confusing.)
I do think it's meant to be Lithuania, but I don't think it's following any sort of Earth timeline (which only had a kingdom of Lithuania at 1251-1263), so maybe it was post-Columbus? My sense was it was taking place during the general Pale of Settlement era, i.e. ~18th century. I see your point about the Crusades, and it does seem like Novik was maybe going for the 1200s/1300s with the kingdom of Lithvas. But I also thought it was maybe set after the expulsion of Jews from Spain, because of a reference to someone's relative leaving what sounded like a southern-climate country. I expect it's all a giant mishmash of centuries, because fantasy.
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