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conuly ([personal profile] conuly) wrote2023-10-21 02:45 am

"Hedgehog" by Chu Chen Po (ninth century), translated by Kenneth Rexroth

He ambles along like a walking pin cushion,
Stops and curls up like a chestnut burr.
He's not worried because he's so little.
Nobody is going to slap him around.


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[personal profile] dine 2023-10-20 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, I do so love this! it's absolutely wonderful
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[personal profile] elainegrey 2023-10-20 04:56 pm (UTC)(link)
And i love Rexroth. Maybe i should read some of his other translations today.
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[personal profile] larryhammer 2023-10-20 05:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, 9th century means he's Tang, which means he should be in the Complete Tang Poems, which means if I can figure out how his name is spelled I should be able to find the original text. Or maybe it'd be better to search CTP for 刺猬, or maybe just 猬 since this is Classical Chinese ... :wanders off muttering:

ETA: Okay, found it, in a book of comic poems, under the title "Song of the Hedgehog" -- only in CTP it's credited to 李贞白, Li Zhenbai. Which is not surprising for Rexroth. At a quick glance, though the poem is at least roughly accurate -- here's a version with meanings when you hover over a character. I'll see if I can sot up a rendering. I'm not the poet Rexroth is, but it'll be fun to compare ...

ETA2: I did Rexroth a wrong -- the author is credited, in different texts, as both 李贞白/Li Zhenbai and 朱贞白/Zhu Zhenbai, the latter of which is rendered as Chu Chenpo in Wade-Giles transcription.
Edited (found it / correction) 2023-10-20 18:17 (UTC)
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[personal profile] larryhammer 2023-10-20 06:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, not to hijack your excellent post, but I had enough time during lunch to post my own version.

A nice kickstart to finally getting around to investigating the humorous poems of the Tang Dynasty. Thank you!
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[personal profile] larryhammer 2023-10-20 11:00 pm (UTC)(link)

Heh.

FWIW, I'm not satisfied with my first line -- the rhythm is wonky. Well, that's what revisions are for, fixing things.

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[personal profile] adafrog 2023-10-21 02:55 am (UTC)(link)
Interesting last line.
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[personal profile] darkoshi 2023-10-23 06:43 am (UTC)(link)
and i love your icon!
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[personal profile] cesy 2023-10-23 01:16 pm (UTC)(link)

Aww, lovely!

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[personal profile] larryhammer 2023-10-23 03:50 pm (UTC)(link)
It's freely rendered but idiomatically accurate.
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[personal profile] dine 2023-10-23 09:11 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, thank you. I've had it ages and cannot remember where I found the image. but I enjoy it a lot