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conuly ([personal profile] conuly) wrote2023-10-21 02:45 am

"Hedgehog" by Chu Chen Po (ninth century), translated by Kenneth Rexroth

He ambles along like a walking pin cushion,
Stops and curls up like a chestnut burr.
He's not worried because he's so little.
Nobody is going to slap him around.


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[personal profile] larryhammer 2023-10-20 11:00 pm (UTC)(link)

Heh.

FWIW, I'm not satisfied with my first line -- the rhythm is wonky. Well, that's what revisions are for, fixing things.